In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think accounts for this phenomenon? • Technological improvements • Changes to education systems • Improvements to our diets Use specific details and examples in your answer. You may choose more than one cause.

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Recently it has been discovered that growth expectancy has increased noticeably and in my opinion,
this
can be traced to advanced technology and new discoveries concerning our eating habits and lifestyle in general.
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essay will discuss the different possibilities that have led to
this
.
Firstly
, modern cooking styles and methods are being encouraged in the cooking of food. These styles have been discovered to be more effective in preserving food nutrients at every meal.
Also
the rave of healthy eating which encourages diets filled with more fruits and vegetables have been noticed to have a significant effect on the aging process.
Moreover
, eating of simple diets rich in the needed nutrients has been noticed to reduce sickness and disease in older people.
For example
the juice and smoothie diet, which have greatly reduced obesity and other diseases linked to it.
secondly with
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Secondly, with
Secondly with
the technological advancements in cooking utensils,
for example
the air fryer, which can fry and grill food in a more healthy way than traditional equipments. These will reduce the interference of harmful toxic chemicals found in these equipments
such
as Lead metal, to produce healthier meal.
However generally
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However, generally
, Lifestyle has evolved over the years with more education on better and simpler ways of living that would lead to a longer activity span in the older generation.
Thirdly
, I would particularly mention that advancements in modern medicine have greatly increased longer living as heart threatening diseases can be discovered early and treated most effectively with modern medicine.
For example
the discovery and management of heart diseases
,
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,
cancer in older people can be effectively cured or managed appropriately. In conclusion, the evolution of medicine and cooking has greatly affected the life span of the aging population making them live longer and healthier lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • advancements
  • innovations
  • mortality rate
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • public health campaigns
  • nutritional science
  • superfoods
  • balanced diet
  • disease prevention
  • quality of life
  • wellness
  • chronic diseases
  • early detection
  • minimal invasive surgeries
  • emergency services
  • diverse food choices
  • longevity
  • physical fitness
  • work-related hazards
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