Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Eating non
vegetarion
eater of fruits and grains and nuts; someone who eats no meat or fish or (often) any animal products
vegetarian
vegetation
vegetarians
is followed by many people around the world in recent days. Some people do not like to eat
fish
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or
meat
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for their health. And believe it harms animals as well.
This
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eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss about eating non-veg will affect mankind or not.
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Also I
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Also, I
will share my opinion on
this
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. People having
meat
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and
fish
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from their childhood will be strong and healthy. They may not be affected from calcium, iron, and
protiens
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
proteins
. People will not be affected
from
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by
digestion problem
also
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.
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,
such
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people will be less affected by bone problems, strong teeth, and will be strong enough to fight any health issues. People who do not have non-veg will maintain their physical body structure. They will be more
energtic
possessing or exerting or displaying energy
energetic
and be slim and fit. Due to not having
meat
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and
fish
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they will not be
afftected
acted upon; influenced
affected
from
colestrol
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
. Now a days people are
afftected
acted upon; influenced
affected
from
secifipic
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fever which
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fever, which
occures
come to pass
occurs
due to having
meat
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.
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, swine flu was affected from having
meat
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. As water
get
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gets
more polluted from plastics we do not get fresh
fish
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, having that humans will be
afftcted
acted upon; influenced
affected
. In my opinion, people can be strong and body fit by not having the
meat
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and
fish
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. We can be safe from many
desiess
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
as well.
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world can have many birds and animals
surronded
confined on all sides
surrounded
stranded
. The whole world can be free to survive. It is
beatiful
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
with fishes in the lake and
pounds
a small lake
ponds
. In conclusion, we must avoid killing animals and sea life for human benefits, which in turn reduce the number of new diseases introduced.
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