You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what you liked about the food or service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in order to give feedback on your
restaurant
where my friend
from the United States and I ate for a special occasion.
while
I am calling to make a reservation with your employee over the phone. She is extremely nice with a good personality of voice and tone, and also
the attention to detail. When we arrived at the restaurant
. Staff directly escort to the table with make us feel impressed with the service from your staff.
We ate at your restaurant
for my friend
's first time visiting Thailand. First and foremost, we look for fancy and authentic Thai cuisine resulting from a Google application. Moreover
, my friend
never had Thai cuisine before as the result on the internet shows that your restaurant
is famous for Thai food and has a very authentic taste.
Last
but not least, I am very happy with all the food which we got. The taste is absolutely authentic taste. The menu gives all the information which makes my friend
understand the food easily, also
all of the staff are friendly and professional service.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further
information.
Yours faithfully,
PreawpiroonSubmitted by fonnfahh2402 on
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General
Consider using a more personalized greeting such as 'Dear Manager' or the name of the restaurant to make your letter feel more directed and personal.
General
To maintain a professional tone, ensure that your sentences are complete and well-structured. Avoid run-on sentences or fragments.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. For example, one paragraph for the reservation experience, another for the reason for the celebration, and a third discussing what you liked about the food and service.
Task Achievement
Provide specific examples of what you liked about the food and service to make your praise more meaningful. For example, mention a particular dish you enjoyed or a specific aspect of the service that stood out.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite