Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular.why is this?what effects does that have on society?

#tv #movies #crime #effects #society

Thesedays

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These days

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audience

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audiences

prefer to watch tv program and films based on

crime

because of its thrilling and exciting element.

this

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This

can have both positive and negative

impact

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impacts

on society in various ways. Crimes movies and shows are often fascinating and thrilling to watch by people.

This

type of movies

consis

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consists

consist

of impactful content and generally enjoyed by mass of various age groups. Unlike it, romantic genre series fails to attract

different age group

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different age groups

a different age group

and very much limited to teenagers.

Crime

series leaves people in suspense which drive them more into

such

program.

In addition

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crime

movies are very well know for it's real event story and non-fictional content. There are innumerable documentary films being produced owing to

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

raw content and good potential in connecting people at larger scale. To illustrate

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historical movies are well acclaimed among Indian audiences and critics

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hence

Bollywood

are

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more focused on

such

category of films. In terms of positive effect

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crime

movies create awareness about violent activities in society. By watching

such

movie

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people

gains

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gain

knowledge about

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and thought

process

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processes

of criminal which could be beneficial for making ourself and family alert while encountering obnoxious people.

Thus

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improve

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improves

the safety and security of society by avoiding tragedy experiences.

However

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it can

also

break strong community when people become obsessive about violent movies and make various false

assumption

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assumptions

on social activism.

Thus

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people withdraw from social activity which might attribute towards anti-social behaviours in them. In conclusion,

crime act

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crime, act

offer factual

narration which

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narration, which

is the primary factor for driving force. Despite

this

crime

series have brought too many problems to be considered positive trend.

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Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular.why is this?what effects does that have on society?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that entering the workplace after school is far more beneficial than studying at university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that it is good idea to have dress code at work place. do you agree ?

In today's time the internet is making it easy to stdy online from home. some perfer online courses to study they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education discuss both views and share your perion.

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