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Many criminals commit for the crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

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From the past to present, the crime has been having many impacts on the civilization. There are numerous criminals in the imprisonment. After getting released from the
jail
, some of them again, do the unlawful things. There are several factors responsible for
this
 problem which I would like to explicate in the essay and suggest some ways forward. The
first
 reason is the environment of the
jail
 in which a criminal stay that may have few impacts on the
behaviour
 of that person.
In addition
 to
this
, always staying in the darkness can have a huge effect on the prisoners.
Moreover
, a person having imprisonment after a simple crime, join the company of the serious criminals.
Thus
, having the brainwash by them can lead to unlawful
behaviour
 after releasing from the prison.
Furthermore
, sometime the
behaviour
 of the
jail
 officials, during the imprisonment can
also
 influence the prisoner stayers. To cite an example, In the Indian jails, some prisoners get tortured by police on behalf of their religion which later become serious criminals. The solutions are not simple.
Therefore
 the steps have to be taken on a war footing. The
first
 solution can be a decision of separating the serious criminals from others.
Therefore
, they may not be able to put bad things in others mind.
Furthermore
, the idea of diverting the mind of prisoners to sports and other activities which can be fruitful for them to become socialized with others.
For example
, in the Canada,
jail
 administration involves the prisoners toward physical activities
such
 as soccer, tennis, gym and other game.
Thus
, some of them will adopt a good
behaviour
 in the future. To conclude, committing crimes by person after releasing from
jail
 is a devastating issue. It has many consequences to the civilization, but some precautions can be taken by the Government and solutions can be applied to stop
this
 trend which will be helpful for the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rehabilitation
  • Reintegrate
  • Social stigma
  • Recidivism
  • Criminal records
  • Ex-offender
  • Associations
  • Comprehensive
  • Workforce
  • Mentoring
  • Incentivize
  • Stigmatize
  • Subsidies
  • Legitimate
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