Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.

The
traffic
as well as the
pollution
became a huge issue today. Some are of
belive
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believing
believe
belief
Bolivia
that the higher taxes on the
cruid
not carefully or expertly made
crude
oil should
helps
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help
to remedy the challenges. I differ to the viewport to a large extent. Some visible steps are
therer
in or at that place
there
to resolve the condition. Both, justification as well as effective measure
are discused
Suggestion
is discussed
are discussed
further
. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that the
pollution
not only spread by
use
of
vechicle
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a vehicle
vehicle
the vehicle
vehicles
, various
source
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sources
of
pollution
are there
such
as industries, dumping area, mines and
many
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much
more. In a
urban
relating to or concerned with a city or densely populated area
Urban
area
traffica
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
is mostly influenced by the
strey
a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program
story
cattles
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cutlass'
and careless driving of people.
On the other hand
traffic
police is not serious
abou the
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about his
about he
jam and it eventually leads to
pollution
exhausted by the Vehicle engine.
In addition
the hike in the cost of the gasoline push up the price of
transportion
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
and
then
things
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the things
that we
use
daily because more costly.
However
, a few
meausere
any of numerous small rodents typically resembling diminutive rats having pointed snouts and small ears on elongated bodies with slender usually hairless tails
mouse
can really help to overcome the situation. The most important step is the more wider road, the less
trafiic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
tragic
jam.
Goverment
Suggestion
The government
Government
should have to make
road
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a road
the road
wider to
slove
find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of
solve
the
traffic
problem
also
the
strict
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Strict
rules should be needed regarding to
parking
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park
on the road side.
However
, the
dentention
a state of being confined (usually for a short time)
detention
of vehicle after some age is
helps
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helping
to reduce
pollution
caused by vehicle activity.
In
contrast people
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contrast, people
should have
emphasig
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Emphasis
Emphasig
on the
use
of public
transport which
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transport, which
useful to remedy both
the issue
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the traffic issue
traffic
as well as
pollution
.
However authontise
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However, events
However events
However authentic
can adopt some
techinques
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
techniques
such
as odd-even rules, a cycle day, other resource of energy and more can
pooling
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Pooling
is a better way to reach
same piece
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the same piece
rather than to go above.
Thus
to sum up it can be said that the hike in the cost of fuel oil is not the solution. It is our
resposibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
follow
Suggestion
to follow
the rules and
use
the public transport it is possible to
rewoke
use again in altered form
rework
revoke
the
mentioed
make reference to
mentioned
issues.
Submitted by Gautam Patel on

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