You read an article in a newspaper about a citUT or town.Some of the information in that article was not correct.Write a letter to the newspaper editions. Describe how you know the city Tell what the problems are Suggest what you want the editor to do

Dear Sir, My name is Kiran, a resident of Prem Nagar, Ludhiana.I am a regular reader of your esteemed newspaper.

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, today I am writing

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letter to draw your kind attention

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the inaccurate information published in 'The Times of India' regarding my hometown dated 16/07/2020. Let me explain in detail the situation.

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an article was published in the unknown facts column about the history of my hometown.

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the article provided extremely authentic information, it had not fully

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the knowledge of a well known Razia sultan's fort, and it was perhaps, mistakenly mentioned Rani Laxmibai

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of Razia in the column. Taking into consideration, the reputation of

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newspaper, I would like to suggest that it must be republished with the correct name so that people might expect realistic news from

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a reputed newspaper and it would

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enhance the public faith towards the publishing authority. Hoping for a kind consideration in

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regard. Yours faithfully, Kiran

kajalmaan.16

Aug 1, 2020

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