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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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In some countries, the population of young people is significantly higher than the proportion of elderly. Having a larger proportion of
youth
 is believed that it has more pros in the country because they are more active and well-educated. I believe that it is better to have more
youth
 proportion.
First
 of all, the young generation is known by their fresh ideas and energetic personalities. They can impact positively the efficiency of their job. They
also
 have competition among themselves.
Therefore
, they will always try their best to pass each other and
this
 will influence the speed of the country’s development. The new generation is growing in the technology age and they can handle it better than their elders,
thus
 they can learn, share their ideas faster and see things going on more objectively.
Also
,
youth
 people are open-minded, so they can see their mistakes very easily from others and can fix them quickly. Youths are the future of the world. They can lead better elders because since elders born everything has changed and
this
 is so hard for them to get used to it. As a teenager, I can say that we can guess the future better than older people. The reason why I believe
this
 is elders already have seen enough could get used to them in a long period, so it is hard for them to see it again.
Also
, working efficiency of
youth
 people is much more than old-aged people because they can decide faster and more sure. The elder people have already what they had to, so it is unacceptable to expect more from them. They are known by their wisdom and experience. It is better to consult them
instead
 of putting them into work. To sum up all the things considered above,
youth
 people is much more efficient for the country and they can be beneficial. Old people are too slow for today’s world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic
  • workforce
  • productivity
  • innovation
  • skilled labor
  • social development
  • technology
  • dividend
  • competition
  • resources
  • social welfare
  • unrest
  • instability
  • healthcare
  • elderly care
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