Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together

Currently, the majority of
inhabitats
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the inhabitants
inhabitants
who live in various types of citizen of nations are thinking about improving their cultures and ages are
bringing
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brought
by listening the some
musics
are better way to them. I think, their cultures might be change to national aspects of them unless they listen some ones related to their national traditions. Obviously, humans who have a talent
to sing
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sing
musics
as a musically gifted from their younger ages.
Thus
, most teenagers interested in singing
one
in upbeat
temp
(music) the speed at which a composition is to be played
tempo
.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, young generations frequently
repete
to say, state, or perform again
repeat
the same
musics
in order to well-known. From
one
angle, they used to think as a young
,
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,
as a result
,
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,
it might be
unprefessional
not characteristic of or befitting a profession or one engaged in a profession
unprofessional
abilities
of
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on
them. Because, so many contemporary
musics
rose substantially from
21st century
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the 21st century
.
For example
, in
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries
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country
country's
singers are carrying on
imitate
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imitating
to
european
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
nations.
As a result
, their cultures related to national traditions were
abondoned
forsaken by owner or inhabitants
abandoned
abundant
in
day
to
day
.
However
, these kinds of attitudes have to think logically as elderly. Most old people tried to make
professinal
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
professionals
melodies and sing by heart as an actor while
nebo
a river in northwestern Russia flowing generally west into the Gulf of Finland
Neva
was continuing
song
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the song
.
Therefore
, old singers's melodies are still listening by humans.
For instance
, the production of
20th century
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the 20th century
was Titanic music is still popular over the world. Because,
this
one
processed excellent, each person knows about unforgettable
one
. Nowadays, a massive hit
melodies
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melody
are bringing
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is bringing
a sizeable followings. To conclude,
although
the rate of
musics
are increasing
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is increasing
gradually
day
by
day
,
Accept space
,
humans try to listen them looking at their moods. I think, every
countries's
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country
singers
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singer
should sing appropriate to their national
tradions
an inherited pattern of thought or action
traditions
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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