Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films, and songs) in any way they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with the opinion?

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It is undeniably true that the artist with creativity in the fields of cinema, music, writing and drawing should not be restricted by those in governance. I agree with

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in my opinion. On the one hand, the artistic abilities are expressed in various ways in

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era of globalization due to extreme advancement of the technology.

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creativity are not to be restricted, as these have various benefits.

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, movies and documentaries on numerous topics, namely science, history and biography of influential people has helped in enormous way for a commoner to attain knowledge regarding the same.

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most people of those nations would not have acquired these ideas and knowledge.

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, movies

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as Pearl Harbor demonstrate the history and how military professionals fought for their country which in turn influence many youngsters to join the respective army force.

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, these creative ideas of art are misused in many ways.

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, some write articles and novels to criticize others life, notably personal life.

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to add, some artist writes articles or create new movies based on a particular nation, people or a company without obtaining proper permission from them. In conclusion, The governing bodies should not restrict those with creative ideas as it is beneficial both for the artist as well as the populace who enjoys them.

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, those in governance should carry out strict rule regarding attains permissions before intervening on any particular person or a company.

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