More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As corpulence is still currently on the rise, people are more aware of the calamitous effect it has on public health and are looking for measures to
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it. Many support the rise in prices of fattening
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as a good solution. I completely agree with
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opinion and will provide my reasons below.
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,
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gives consumers more choices of
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. At the moment, the
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market is flooded with cheap calorific
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full of sugar, fat and salt that people from middle-to-low income groups usually opt for to maintain
high level
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a high level
of energy while protecting their spending.
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, with $10, a
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someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold
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can buy a whole meal of burger and drinks at
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McDonald’s, but
only two types of vegetables that do not provide enough energy for him to continue his work.
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, increasing the pay tag for
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options steer customers away from them and towards vegetables, fruits or healthier alternative
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. It helps people feel more comfortable purchasing healthy
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while not having to worry about their pocket.
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, since price is always considered when shopping, increased prices force people who enter the downward spiral of obesity to eschew. If a greasy Chinese noodle dish is now more expensive, people will certainly ask for more low-fat options.
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can
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mean the shift will
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prompt changes within the
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providers, either small businesses or large corporate
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companies, targeting the psychology of buyers to transform the industry as a whole towards avoiding fattening
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and encouraging healthy
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selections.
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, taxing and making greasy
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expensive directly affect consumers and providers effectively in reducing fat consumption and
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obesity and overweight. To conclude, I agree with tackling obesity through increased price of fattening
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for its possible efficacy and I believe that the future will see more healthy
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options being made cheaper and more affordable than unhealthy ones.

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