The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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It is undeniably true that increased population is the most colossal threat faced by humans in

this

advanced era. I do agree with

this

statement.

This

essay will discuss the major reasons behind

this

predicament. In today's world

Accept space

increasing population is a vital issue with many ramifications.

Firstly

this

has affected

environment

Suggestion

the environment

in various ways.

For example

, heightened population has caused numerous types of

pollution including

Accept comma addition

pollution, including

noise, air, water and soil pollution.

In addition

, these pollution has caused deforestation and

aforestaion

the conversion of bare or cultivated land into forest (originally for the purpose of hunting)

afforestation

converting many productive land mass to infertile and barren areas.

Furthermore

, polluting

air

Suggestion

the air

with hazardous gases has affected environmental temperature causing ozone layer depletion

Accept space

global warming especially melting of glaciers.

Moreover

, these polluted air has

also

impacted people's health.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

122 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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