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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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" Every coin has two sides" Many people claim to restrict personal
vehicle
 on transpiration road, at least one day in
month
Suggestion
the month
a month
. There are several merits to do
this
 thing and few demerits in society. To start up with, benefits side,
Firstly
, to be clean and safe environment are the primary priority for civilians.
Vehicle
 are run by petroleum fuels like, Petrol, Gas, and CNG, these are the major elements which are creating more and more global warming. That's why, If it can possible to stop using private car once in a
month
, it would be a great influence to cut down the pollution level.
Moreover
, local people could get the opportunity to clean road dust and make fresh neighbourhood. What's more, local artists will get a chance once in a
month
 to perform their skills on the road in front of walking audience, which will be made attractions for local people and while watching these kinds of concerts, people can release their daily stress and recharge for tomorrow's routine works/ On the flip sides, Today's people have materialistic mindset, usually, they work 7 days a week, far from their home.
Thus
, private
vehicle
 only the option which can help them to reach on time at work.
Furthermore
, It's a complicate decision for Government as well, For an Instance, If they decide to
vehicle
 free-day on a day of weekend, it would be unsatisfaction for family who are busy during the whole weekdays, and during a weekdays it has same adverse effect on publicaly, because generaly, private and government sectore are working of Monday - Friday. To recapitulate, There are some demerits and more merits for
vehicle
 free day once in
month
 personally, I would say, environment, safety is the future investment, as long as people are breathing fresh air, obviously, they can live long and energetic.
However
, the government could place a state holiday on a particular date for throughout the year. It could be help mentally, as people would be prepared earlier for that date.
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