Some people think that spending a lot on holding weddings, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views.
People have different approaches towards the extent of expenditures on social gatherings including weddings. Proponents believe that
happiness
needs to be celebrated through luxurious events. Use synonyms
However
, opponents consider it as an unnecessary expense. In my opinion, these events should be low on budget to avoid competition.
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Firstly
, people organize lavish events with expectation to gain Linking Words
happiness
and create memories. Use synonyms
For example
, people in rural India save Linking Words
money
throughout life to spend on dowry and wedding festivities. Grand celebrations in Use synonyms
such
events are considered as part of tradition and respect. Hosting expensive parties are praised by guests, which is a source of Linking Words
happiness
for organizers. Since occasions including wedding are considered as long sighted Use synonyms
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people are adamant to spend a huge chunk of Linking Words
money
on them.
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Secondly
, heavily budgeted events are considered as waste of resources by many. People spend aggressively on celebrations and Linking Words
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money
can be used for many important situations. Use synonyms
For example
, India's wealthiest person spent over US$ 100 million on his daughter's wedding. Linking Words
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money
could have been saved up for much more critical purposes including the current pandemic. The Use synonyms
money
could have been used to help those who have lost their jobs. Use synonyms
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money
saved from spending on events can be used for turbulent times.
In my opinion, expenditure on events leads to competition. Socializing events and customs are part of every Use synonyms
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community regardless
of demographic and geographic differences. Accept comma addition
community, regardless
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community
member it becomes customary for the disadvantaged members of the Use synonyms
community
to follow same. Use synonyms
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, it is a practice in conventional communities Linking Words
such
as those belonging to India to award their daughters a car on their wedding. Linking Words
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practice burdens economically weak society members to follow the same tradition. If they don't comply, Linking Words
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they are shamed by other subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
then then
community
members. Use synonyms
Therefore
, to weed out Linking Words
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competition, it is necessary to relax expenditure on social events Linking Words
such
as weddings.
To conclude, unusual spending on events that are meant to socialize and cherish will be a wastage of Linking Words
money
. People perceive inclusion of Use synonyms
money
in events as the foundation of Use synonyms
happiness
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it creates a race amongst people, which distract them from important elements of life including health and education.Linking Words
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