SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ALLOWING CHILDREN TO MAKE THEIR OWN DECISION ON EVERYDAY MATTERS IS LIKELY TO RESULT IN A SOCIETY OF INDIVIDUALS WHO ONLY THINK ABOUT THEIR OWN WISHES. OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO MAKE DECISION ABOUT MATTERS THAT AFFECT THEM. DISCUSS BOTH OPINIONS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION

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Decision making is a vital skill in the growth of a person as well as the proficiency in deciding a particular direction makes minor to be responsible to cope up with its good or bad consequences in the eventualities of the
life
. Some people opine that, to give freedom to choose a specific route makes a child more selfish while others believe that it is important to learn choice making skills. I personally believe that, the children should select their path by themselves, but parents should guide them before they come to finalize the choice. In my essay, I would like to shed some light on both the views and give an opinion. On the one hand, parents should not force the juvenile to finalize any of the option which decides their career and
life
because, if the children make the choices by themselves they not only work hard to fulfil it but
also
learn to take initiative, develop leadership skills and make them learn from their mistakes or small wrong doings, whether it is a career or about to choose a soulmate.
In other words
,
For example
, teenagers should be free to decide their own career field and soul mate, as these make them to enjoy at fullest.
However
, the parent should provide them proper guidance about the positive and negative impacts of the available choices, which gives them proper understanding to face the difficulties bravely to achieve something important in the
life
.
Moreover
, research says that, the adolescents who tend to be independent in decision making from childhood, they can easily face the future difficulties.
On the other hand
, Parents should not offer a teenager a complete freedom. If they make the wrong decisions parents have to mentor them at a proper time before getting late.
For Instance
if a youngster wants to see his favourite show, he should consider that other family members are enjoying with a another show. I will see it later without being stubborn. So, parents should give understanding to the adolescent that they should consider the benefits and happiness to others while choose a stream in
life whether
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life, whether
it is a Television show, a place to visit or an outfit to wear. To conclude, Adolescents should be free to make the decision in their
life but
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life, but
simultaneously, parents should guide them that how to select a proper path as it develop a plethora of skills in them.
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