IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 8

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

#countries #world #challenges #environment #population #education #country #face #ten #years
The issues related to the surrounding, various pollution and education are becoming highly debated topic around the globe nowadays.
This
 menace would probably increase the more issues after the decade. But,
this
 problem would curb in the near forthcoming, if the appropriate actions implemented soon like controlling traffic, planting more trees that balance the nature and creating affordable education to the common public. The major problem will be the nation face is, the more imbalance in the atmosphere which is responsible to make the earth live. As
this
 damaging is because of the soared pollution levels in the air that will
also
 affect the human health.
This
 present issue arose from the uneducated people living on the planet who do not care about the future consequences.
For instance
, the eminent scientist did a research and found that the condition of the human and the environment would be worsened in the upcoming time if not hamper now. The prime solution of all
this
 problems is making people aware of the devastating influence of the present action.
This
 chance could bring up with the support of the regime. When, the regime would formulate the hassle free education system, number of uneducated population declines. Because educated folks understand better, the adverse effect on the environment would be diminished.
For example
, in the January 2020, the UK university students did a survey and revealed that if the people are well educated, they tend to have more concern about the nature and the environment. In conclusion, all the problems are due to the lack of knowledge and understanding ability of individuals regarding the importance of keeping surrounding safe.
However
, to stop
this
 detrimental impacts soon, both the individuals and the regime should work as a team for better results.
Submitted by drsefalipatel on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
What to do next:
Look at other essays: