Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Ram, I am writing to let you know, I would be happy to participate in the seminar which you advertised

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you to provide some information related to the program. I am keen on hearing, what are the topics you will be going to cover and their schedule dates and timings. I have plans to visit

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month and if your dates match

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my trip will be well and good. Needed some more information on it, will you be helping to arrange the accommodation for the participants? As the venue is quite far from the city. Will the sponsor pay the cost of accommodation? If not, please provide the detailed information of rooms and respective charges. I need to check my budget, will it allow me or not. Thank you very much for considering. Looking forward

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faithfully, Vinod Rajput

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Aug 7, 2020

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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158 words

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