Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In the recent years, the rate of
abortion
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is gradually increasing.
However
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, some people argue that, some action should be taken against it,
where as
on the other hand
whereas
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
have an opinion that, it should be made legal. In my opinion, an intermediate way should be created.
To begin
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with,
rate
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the rate
of
abortion
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is increasing over the years as that
freedom
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is given to the people. Due to which, parents can plan their
child
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and can provide better social and financial life
to
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for
there
of them or themselves
their
next
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generation.
For instance
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, if a lady becomes pregnant at a certain stage of her life in which she do not want to give birth to a
child
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, maybe because of the career goals, financial goals or many more,
then
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she should be the person who decides
to do
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to do with abortion
abortion
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or not.
Therefore
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, we can say that,
abortion
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can
given
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give
legal status as it helps families to plan better conditions to
there
of them or themselves
their
child
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.
On the other hand
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, In many societies,
abortion
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is consider
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is considered
as a serious crime. The reason for
that is
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, people consider it as
killing
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the killing
of the life and
that is
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a serious crime.
For example
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, In India,
abortion
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is not allowed as people consider it as a gift of the god and doing
abortion
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is not
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
prepared
, as it is not accepted by the society.
Hence
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,
this
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is the reason why people are against the
abortion
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. In my opinion, I think people should have
freedom
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to do
abortion
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till the
third
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month of the
pregnency
the state of being pregnant; the period from conception to birth when a woman carries a developing fetus in her uterus
pregnancy
, as
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child
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the child
a child
is not developed completely, and by implementing
this
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rule, people will have
freedom
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to decide as well as, the practice of infant killing will not be encouraged. In conclusion, the
freedom
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to do
abortion
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or not should be
decide
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decided
by the
parents but
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parents, but
a law should be implemented by which the
abortion
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is not encouraged in the society.
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