Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the recent years, the rate of
abortion
is gradually increasing.
However
, some people argue that, some action should be taken against it,
where as
on the other hand
whereas
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
have an opinion that, it should be made legal. In my opinion, an intermediate way should be created.
To begin
with,
rate
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the rate
of
abortion
is increasing over the years as that
freedom
is given to the people. Due to which, parents can plan their
child
and can provide better social and financial life
to
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for
there
of them or themselves
their
next
generation.
For instance
, if a lady becomes pregnant at a certain stage of her life in which she do not want to give birth to a
child
, maybe because of the career goals, financial goals or many more,
then
she should be the person who decides
to do
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to do with abortion
abortion
or not.
Therefore
, we can say that,
abortion
can
given
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give
legal status as it helps families to plan better conditions to
there
of them or themselves
their
child
.
On the other hand
, In many societies,
abortion
is consider
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is considered
as a serious crime. The reason for
that is
, people consider it as
killing
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the killing
of the life and
that is
a serious crime.
For example
, In India,
abortion
is not allowed as people consider it as a gift of the god and doing
abortion
is not
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
prepared
, as it is not accepted by the society.
Hence
,
this
is the reason why people are against the
abortion
. In my opinion, I think people should have
freedom
to do
abortion
till the
third
month of the
pregnency
the state of being pregnant; the period from conception to birth when a woman carries a developing fetus in her uterus
pregnancy
, as
child
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the child
a child
is not developed completely, and by implementing
this
rule, people will have
freedom
to decide as well as, the practice of infant killing will not be encouraged. In conclusion, the
freedom
to do
abortion
or not should be
decide
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decided
by the
parents but
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parents, but
a law should be implemented by which the
abortion
is not encouraged in the society.
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