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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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There is no doubt that the use of internet has been increasing in the recent times. There are some people believe that in coming years, everyone would subscribe into the digital media as it would be free of cost, in my opinion, I think there is a slight chance to occur the complete transition.
First
 and foremost, these e- channels may ask subscription charges after the certain period of time.
This
 is because during the launching of an online establishment often channels give some offers to attract and increase their channel rating.
However
, after attaining their target viewers, they would stop free viewing option.
For instance
, the blog called The learning English, which could be accessed by anyone in the online till 2018, after that they have changed the policy and current only available paid version of the channel. Another point is to consider here is that the older generation still prefer to have paper books and news since they, generally, interested in the traditional way of reading habits.
Additionally
, learning computer skill might be found difficult by many elderly people.
Therefore
, there is a less chance to follow a novel method of reading habit in the foreseeable future.
For example
, some studies suggested that setting a new method of habit requires a lot of effort and time.
Therefore
, the complete transformation can rarely occur as predicted by the other group. In conclusion, while it is sometimes argued that paper reading materials would be overtaken by the digital ones, I firmly believe it would not
happened
Suggestion
happen
 any time soon.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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