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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that sports where the
competion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 becomes heated within the teams or the individual do not belong in the
school's
Suggestion
school
 education system.
This
 essay argues that sports deserve to have a place in the
school
's curriculum
.
Accept space
.
sports
Suggestion
Sports
such
 as
footbal
any of various games played with a ball (round or oval) in which two teams try to kick or carry or propel the ball into each other's goal
football
 and basketball plays a big role when it comes to building a man's personality.
in
Suggestion
In
 addition
,
Accept space
,
 it helps them to have a balanced lifestyle and encourage them to study hard to get a scholarship.  The stigma around women being in sports have been long argued. There was a study that
was done in 2015 demonstrated
Suggestion
demonstrated in 2015
was in 2015 demonstrated
was done in 2015 demonstrated
 that women from the age of 12 to 15 engage in sport activities
such
 as
gymnastic
Suggestion
gymnastics
 and
vollyable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
 five times week the reason being it helps them to boost their
confedance
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
. Sports helps young women in
school
 to see that there is nothing wrong with breaking gender roles and
joinig
the act of bringing two things into contact (especially for communication)
joining
 a football team, it helps them to
devolope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
this
 mindset that men and women are equal from
such
 a young age. 
competing
Suggestion
Competing
 with teams or as individual gives them a perspective of how the world works after finishing
schools
Suggestion
school
. Organising sport events in schools have a huge impact
in
Suggestion
on
 student's mental health. To conclude, sports in
school
's curriculum could help build a generation of confident, well organised and educated mankind. Premium access to
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