Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A group of people believes cheap air flights gives an ordinary person an opportunity to travel freely, while another group of people believe cheap flights should be banned as it leads to pollution to the environment and many related problems. Should these fights actually get banned? In my view it shouldn't happen, as
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could we have an impact on economic of the country. The fights are public transport,
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run by private bodies. These bodies hardly make any profit from the aviation business as, governmental bodies charge them with high amount of taxes, so if they would increase the
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price there is a high chance they would lose quite a number of customers
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could even damage company reputation which is not a great idea. The group of people who believe there shouldn't be cheap flights are mostly of the category like a business man, famous film maker or film stars or a famous cricketer, etc. These people could afford the high prices of a
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while some could even afford to buy their own aircraft. They are less worried about the environment which they speak off and more worried about their stands. So in my opinion cheap
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should be there, so that common can we experience joy of flying. If it is all about environmental problems,
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won't get reduced by just putting an end to cheap flights because whenever a
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take off or land it release the same amount of plant despite the fact of passengers inside the cabin.
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