Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the
last
few decades, the development of flying aircraft has become so rapid and fierce that while it brings some great benefits, it
also
gives some negative outcomes. A huge portion of
population
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the population
now has the easy access to the flight
transportation but
Accept comma addition
transportation, but
at the same time,
air
carriers pollutes the
air
and causes a number of other problems that humanity has to tackle now.
Although
some people might say that
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
outweigh advantages, I tend to believe that benefits are too seductive to deny them and forbid flights.
However
, in
this
essay we are going to discuss both sides of the conflict. There are two main reasons why
this
type of transportation should remain as it is now.
Firstly
, It is much easier to travel for people even with low incomes since they
also
have a right to see the famous landmarks and wonders. One will see, by looking into the latest BBC's article regarding travels, that person who had a chance to travel during his lifetime is much more happier than the one who didn't have;
thus
, becoming more productive and creative.
Secondly
, cheap flight tickets help workers to work in
multicultural environment
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a multicultural environment
. Since it is well known that civilizations which had an access to the neighbours always were the
advantageus
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantage us
ones, it is clear that companies should be able to hire as many cultural individuals from the globe as possible.
On the other hand
, there are
also
two reasons to block or at least to decrease a number of flights.
Firstly
,
air
pollution is causing
series
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a series
of serious consequences
such
as the rise of sea level and global warming.
Therefore
, it is clear that people have to do something
in
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at
this
very moment to avoid global calamities in the future.
For example
, India is suffering from massive floods since the global community cannot handle the exhaust fumes from planes, trains, factories and ships.
Secondly
, we are currently facing a global pandemic of
coronavirus
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a coronavirus
which is ravaging every country in our planet. The main reason for
such
a rapid contamination is that humans are travelling too much and spreading the virus in every corner of the world.
Hence
, if we had not had the planes, the virus would have stayed in China, and eventually die there. In conclusion, despite the fact that flight-ban followers are concerned with the
air
pollution and the pandemic, I tend to think that it is essential to be able to travel and work wherever people want.
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