Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter – Give a brief description of the business – Mention what you’d like to be there on the website – Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

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Hi Rajesh, I hope you are doing well. Thank you for your note, and it is always great to hear from you. I am writing
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letter to ask you for your guidance in preparing a website for my new business.My idea is to start a motorbike showroom in Ghansoli is quite excellent and timely.
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area does not have
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showrooms and I have seen many people travelling 30 to 40 km to buy a motorcycle. They
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visit the nearby town to get motorbike parts. I could not think of anyone else
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and I know that you'll be the best person to contact
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for
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situation. Let me elaborate
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about the website,
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, it is solely for rural people.
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, it will be including all basic parts of motorcycles, tractors and cars which I am planning to show everything
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the website. I have planned
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for the past two years, and have been saving and arranging my plan altogether since
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, I always had the exertion to help and share my experiences with you.
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,
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site would
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show them all kinds of facilities and new motorcycles in the showroom, as well as it would be a platform for all customers to know about the showroom. I hope you could assist and guide me. I would always be grateful for
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Sunil
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