Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but it's disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people love

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to different countries, so the number of tourism is starting to have significant growth. Some people think that it is good for countries earn more money and it is overweigh the disadvantages. In

this

essay

,

Accept space

,

I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. The main advantage is the government gain more income. The consumption will be

increase

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increased

by people who

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

from other countries.

For example

, the

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

trailer

need to

paid

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pay

the food

,

Accept space

,

hotel, souvenir or some facilities admission fee. All of these things

also

included tax, that means it is a revenue to the government.

Additionally

, the

gvoernment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

can allocate

this

recourses to varied industry.

This

make

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makes

the well developed to the country.

For instance

, some companies receive money from governments, so they have more source of income to develop their business and optimize the competitive ability in the world.

However

, there are

also

have drawbacks. Tourism

become

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has become

is becoming

substantially grow up may cause

crowd

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crowding

in the city.

This

make

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makes

citizens are not willing to go out even in their spare time. It is said that Hong Kong is most of the dense city in the world and becoming

overload

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overloaded

with the tourism. The best example is people can not relax to go for shopping because of the crowd and just stay the park where near their home.

Secondly

,

This

may cause the environment issue. A large number of visitors make use of trash or consume resources

such

as fuel when they travel by transports,

this

may cause an impact on the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

is

important income

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an important income

for many countries, they can

ultilize

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

utilize

utilise

the recourse to develop the country and optimize the industry.

However

, the government should limit

the the

definite article

the

vistors

someone who visits

visitors

flowrate

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flow rate

to reduce the impact of the environment.