You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: -give details of your visit to the restaurant -explain the reason for the celebration -say what was good about the food and the service.
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Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I visited your restaurant yesterday , which is located at 15 Burnside Road Victoria, and I was really amazed by the service and cooking quality .
It was my first time at your place , I came all the way from Surrey to celebrate my best friend's birthday here .She was so upset and did not want to celebrate her special day but when I gave her this
party surprise she was very happy and she said she liked and enjoyed your place.
First of all, I liked your staff , they were really nice and helpful because for
the first time, we were not able to decide what should we order so your staff helped us in choosing the items . We ordered 3 large pizzas , 6 plates pasta and pops and our foodstuff was ready within 20 -25 minutes which really shocked us, when we tried the meal it was very delicious and seemed like it was freshly cooked .I would say you have a quick service and very tasty meal in the whole Add the comma(s)
, for
Victoria
. I will definitely come again to your cuisine store on my own birthday as well . Thank you so much for your excellent service .
sincerely
JaspreetChange preposition
of Victoria
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coherence cohesion
Use varied sentence structures to make your writing more engaging. Avoid repetitive phrases and enhance vocabulary to elevate the overall tone.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down complex sentences for better clarity, and ensure each idea or point is presented in its own paragraph to enhance readability.
task achievement
The letter clearly addresses all parts of the task, including details of the visit, reason for the celebration, and what was good about the food and service.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, making it suitable for the purpose of thanking and appreciating the restaurant's service.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-mannered and polite, which adds to the overall positive impression of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite