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Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions

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From the start of the 20th century there was a significant growth in the number of races which are vanishing and some of the creatures are getting extinct during
this
 time.
As a result
 of deforestation, global warming
this
 is happening. With some of the Go Green initiatives and creating forest reserves across the globe
this
 can be controlled over a period of time. Deforestation was one of the primary reasons for the increase of endangered
species
,
also
 in the name of urbanization various forests are destroyed or cut down for the construction of houses, roads, industries which leads to no place for animals thereby all these creatures are getting vanished.
Also
 with
this
, the temperature of the globe is increased, rainfall pattern will affect, extreme weather conditions. Wet these adverse conditions, many races do not have a favourable environment for reproduction and they get extinct day by day. In the recent days sparrow which is a small bird was not visible and the number of birds across global was reduced due to the unfavourable atmosphere. With the help of various nonprofit organizations across the globe, there was more awareness created nowadays, which lead to more Go Green initiatives,
also
 companies are spending or investing in cam pining for these programs. Many countries are joining hands to create forest reserves, which will help to revive the chances of saving the endangered
species
, these reserves are helping to create wildlife, more plantation, more greenery. There was an increase Indian tigers recently from 100 to 250 which is a good progress to save the endangered
species
. To conclude with the help of new techniques and advances in research the number of
species
 getting extinct are increasing. Slowly the world is marching towards a sign of progress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • mass extinctions
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystems
  • ecological imbalance
  • human well-being
  • illegal hunting
  • poaching
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • awareness
  • education
  • conservation
  • laws
  • regulations
  • international cooperation
  • sustainable practices
  • protected areas
  • public awareness
  • community-based conservation efforts
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