Recently, abortion increases rapidly and become a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Abortion is the most controversial issue having no grounds of agreement among two polar aspects. The argument is

life

and death, though the concept of complication makes it difficult. Don’t believe in it really because its murder to an innocent soul, we are not the ones to decide whether

this

life

should live or die. It’s all about

life

or death matter, defined as not only killing

life but

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life, but

yet removing or scratching parts of the mother's organs or damaging parts of the uterus to end a pregnancy.

Overall we

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Overall, we

are surrounded by many questions

such

as: is it forbidden?

Does it committing

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Does it commit

Is it committing

Is it committed

a suicide? Does it cause a fatal fault for the uterus that might never have the chance of pregnancy again? Does it cause damage to sexual daily routine? Sadly, no

one

has ever given an answer, it’s always ignorant personal action without taking in consideration the consequences therefor sad outcome is always there. Having equal supporters on both sides. Yet those supporters have

one

goal in common: decreasing the number of abortions and making abortion safer.

Moreover supporters

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Moreover, supporters

are mainly recluse and selfish to follow a childish act or a mistake by just deciding to make abortion, mostly it happens with younger ages who follow their mistakes by making bigger mistakes.

However there

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However, there

are supporters, but in a good way, regarding old age or fetal problem to the

child

that may cause suffering of the parents or the

child

themselves. Either or no

one

can have the heart or the courage to kill a

life

. And it shouldn’t be legal unless supported by scientifically documents and proofs. According to the other part who is against it, it’s ok to follow

this

path, but sometimes it becomes a bit over reacted

fact

abstaining from food

fast

. As many studies and articles, advice in some specific cases to make abortion, and to be followed by studies and solid reasons yet sometimes people take their thoughts for granted and refuse to listen to others

such

as: Parent’s with cases like down

child

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a child

or children with lack of capabilities that have the chance of suffering for the rest of their lives, but they think from the against point of view which take us to a doubt platform. In conclusion being with or against it’s a very big decision as well as hard to choose. Some points of view think that it should be the decision of the mother as the

child

is only connected to her and no

one

else can feel or diced

such

important move. Yet being very hard decision most probably

this

big moves must be supported proficiently to avoid any regretting in the future.

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