Recently, abortion increases rapidly and become a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Abortion is the most controversial issue having no grounds of agreement among two polar aspects. The argument is
life
and death, though the concept of complication makes it difficult. Don’t believe in it really because its murder to an innocent soul, we are not the ones to decide whether
this
life
should live or die. It’s all about
life
or death matter, defined as not only killing
life but
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life, but
yet removing or scratching parts of the mother's organs or damaging parts of the uterus to end a pregnancy.
Overall we
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Overall, we
are surrounded by many questions
such
as: is it forbidden?
Does it committing
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Does it commit
Is it committing
Is it committed
a suicide? Does it cause a fatal fault for the uterus that might never have the chance of pregnancy again? Does it cause damage to sexual daily routine? Sadly, no
one
has ever given an answer, it’s always ignorant personal action without taking in consideration the consequences therefor sad outcome is always there. Having equal supporters on both sides. Yet those supporters have
one
goal in common: decreasing the number of abortions and making abortion safer.
Moreover supporters
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Moreover, supporters
are mainly recluse and selfish to follow a childish act or a mistake by just deciding to make abortion, mostly it happens with younger ages who follow their mistakes by making bigger mistakes.
However there
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However, there
are supporters, but in a good way, regarding old age or fetal problem to the
child
that may cause suffering of the parents or the
child
themselves. Either or no
one
can have the heart or the courage to kill a
life
. And it shouldn’t be legal unless supported by scientifically documents and proofs. According to the other part who is against it, it’s ok to follow
this
path, but sometimes it becomes a bit over reacted
fact
abstaining from food
fast
. As many studies and articles, advice in some specific cases to make abortion, and to be followed by studies and solid reasons yet sometimes people take their thoughts for granted and refuse to listen to others
such
as: Parent’s with cases like down
child
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a child
or children with lack of capabilities that have the chance of suffering for the rest of their lives, but they think from the against point of view which take us to a doubt platform. In conclusion being with or against it’s a very big decision as well as hard to choose. Some points of view think that it should be the decision of the mother as the
child
is only connected to her and no
one
else can feel or diced
such
important move. Yet being very hard decision most probably
this
big moves must be supported proficiently to avoid any regretting in the future.
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