As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

It is a fact that the more the country develop and the economy become stronger, people tend to buy more cars.

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it is very helpful to the workers to have their own vehicles, it is devastating to the environment so the drawbacks are far greater than the benefits. Scientifically, the impending climate change crises are directly related to the carbon dioxide emission from machines so it is crucial that we reduce the consumption of the gas and fuel so the more cars the citizen own the more we destroy our own planet.

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is a solution, which is supporting the manufacturing of electric cars that might have a significant positive impact on our climate and might contribute in controlling the global warming and we cannot ignore the role of the governments which is encouraging and educating people to purchase electric machines.

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, having more cars will increase the traffic, especially in the mean the roads which is damaging to the economic and public interests for many reasons,

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, road congestion means that employees will waste alot of time in the road

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of acheiving their duties and benefit the country,

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, traffic will endanger peoples lives by keeping the emergency and civil defence cars to get to the location in time so it is bettet that government establish a metro or public trasportation to divert workers from owning their own cars. To sump up, it is important that the government controls the emission of the fuels to save the planet and to establish the right policy which is supported electric cars and public transportation systems.