These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

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Reopening of schools is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion; most of the parents assume that distance learning is safer than the face to face learning in class. As the vaccine for the COVID 19 has not been invented yet. So it would be safer to comply with the safety measures.
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of all, it is worth considering the safety measures distance learning is extremely useful. It highly essential to understand the immunity of the children is not that strong to deal with COVID 19. With that being said, children could suffer from substantial health issues could lead to the terminal illness, which gets more difficult for the parents and
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opts for distance learning and study from home, he/she will not be exposed, and the immunity is not compromised, and the probability of getting sick is very slight. According to experts,
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, most of the parents are having the option to work from
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the health of the
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will be followed by the parents continuously.
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has the flexibility to take the classes at its convenience. He/she will not be spending school hours entirely in front of the screen. In
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health and safety can be sustained. In my opinion, Distance learning shall be considered more helpful and practical in
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pandemic, while the vaccine has not yet made; it is more safe and sound.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • aggressive
  • idolize
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