Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter • Invite him/her to a public event in your country • Describe the public event • Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

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Hi Dave, How have you been since we

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met? I thought I’d drop you a line and see if you fancy coming over for

Bonfire

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night which is on November 5th.

Bonfire

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night is a great event in England, particularly in my hometown. It starts as soon as the sun has set because the event is held around a huge

bonfire

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. AS the weather is cold, the

bonfire

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adds wonderful warmth. On the fire, there’s a guy which represents Guy Fawkes, a man

once

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who once

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tried to blow up Parliament. On top of

that

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there’s

also

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fireworks and a chance to cook your own food on the fire, which I’m sure you’ll love. While you’re over, we’ll be able to do a trip to London as I know you’re always wanted to visit. The Christmas lights will have been switched on by

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and they are amazing. You’ll

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be able to visit the Christmas markets and do all your Christmas shopping. I really hope you’ll be able to come over. It won’t be the same without you. Write back soon, Alina

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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