People’s shopping habits depend more on the age of group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the
last
few decades, shopping has become more than just a necessary chore since people are now able to live more excessive life.
Although
some people might consider that customers'
shopping customs
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shopping, customs
and manners mainly lies
on
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in
their age category, I tend to believe that there are other factors
such
as gender, income level and culture. In
this
essay we are going to discuss these factors more closely.
Firstly
, it is
well known fact
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a well known fact
that nearly 80 percent of customers in shopping centres are women.
For example
, in the latest BBC article about shopping it is said that women are main visitors and clients who spend money in malls since they tend to treat
this
activity as a relief in their everyday work routine. There was
also
a
survery
consider in a comprehensive way
survey
, according to which, female respondents feel
excitement
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the excitement
everytime
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every time
they go to the malls.
Thus
, women form a core of shopping habits
such
as demanding easy access to the
second
floor and demanding bathrooms on every floor.
Secondly
, the level of wealth
also
has an impact
to
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in
on
people's minds and habits.
For instance
, when the one particular person lives in poverty, he does not try to buy anything at all if he does not need it.
However
, when he becomes rich enough to afford any type of luxury, he definitely tries to get it.
Finally
, since all customers and clients live in different countries with their own customs and traditions, it is obvious that the shopping process is viewed everywhere differently.
Consequently
, in some countries like Uzbekistan it is widely considered that shopping is childish and infantile.
Hence
, people there try to obtain only necessary things and avoid luxurious purchases. In conclusion, as we can see from the arguments above, we can easily divide shopping habits into these three categories but not into ages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping habits
  • age group
  • generational differences
  • individual preferences
  • interests
  • socioeconomic factors
  • cultural influences
  • marketing strategies
  • advertising
  • online shopping
  • technology
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