Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities.The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era, world is changing a lot as compared to the past and construction is the
assential
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
part of
this
modanization
making modern in appearance or behavior
modernization
modernisation
of cities. But I personally believe that maintain traditional style is our
first
priority. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.
However
, everyone
know
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knows
that latest construction of buildings only depends on the new methods and
main purpose
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the main purpose
of it is only
atteractive
pleasing to the eye or mind especially through beauty or charm
attractive
look. Because if it
is not fullfill
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is not fulfilling
is not fulfil
does not fulfil
is not fulfilled
doesn't fulfil
has not fulfilled
this
requirment
Accept comma addition
requirement, then
requirement then
then
this
thing will directly
affects
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affect
on the rental price of it. But traditional buildings have
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own value and we can't judge it.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
every coin has two sides " one is positive while another is negative ". Construction of new buildings in
olden way
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the olden way
olden ways
requires
lot
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lots
of extra money and it is
also
time consuming process
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a time consuming process
. Even though, it is
next
to impossible to fix all new
animities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
in it.
However
, traditional looks buildings have numerous advantages than disadvantages. The main plus point is, it reflects our cultural image. Even when new generation
see
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saw
sees
it at that time they realize the
important
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importance
of it. As per the 2016 government report, some
countries
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country's
major economy only depends on
this
type of infrastructures. Because
this
type of things
also
attracts
tourisum
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
and it is directly
affects
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affecting
the ratio of economical
gdp
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GDP
. Due to
this
reason most of the international companies now focus on the cultural projects. To
conlude
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
, If
government
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the government
will give more
attenction
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attention
on cultural way construction rather than
modern type
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the modern type
modern types
of
it
Accept comma addition
it, then
then
it will be beneficial for the society as
weel
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
as for the country. I
have fully agree
Suggestion
have fully agreed
with
this
statement.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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