Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the 21st century,
nowaday's
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
purchasing
different variety
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a different variety
of products, appliances and various things
are becoming
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is becoming
more and
famous
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more famous
these
day
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's. Due to
vast development
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the vast development
in the technology, people these
day
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's are willing to do shopping from
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internet
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the internet
because of many various advantages or it could be due to various cheap rates.
Firstly
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, in today's
world people
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world, people
are more reliable on "
INTERNET
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OF THINGS" means people are more dependent on
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internet
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the internet
for each and every purpose whether it is related to chatting with different people, using
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internet
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the internet
for entertainment purposes or it could
also
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related
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relate
to shopping purpose
also
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. Shopping on
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internet
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the internet
these
day
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's are becoming more popular and
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
, because of may be of its cheap rates and people are
also
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willing to buy
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this products
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this product
these products
from
internet
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only. Purchasing things like books, air tickets and groceries are becoming more popular. There are plenty of
adavantages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
of doing shopping from
internet
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like
for example
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:
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:
- 1) Doing shopping on
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internet
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the internet
is more efficient and you get various
amount
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amounts
of different products. 2) You don't have to bargain at all because have large selection different prices.
Secondly
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, online shopping companies like Amazon, Flipcart and other various companies are generating
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
of
money by selling of
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money by selling
products online with many various advantages.
Yes it
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Yes, it
is true that buying things on
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internet
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the internet
is more
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
continent
and it has
also
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very less amount of disadvantage like
for example
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:
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- 1) getting of wrong products at the time of delivering. 2) Delivery charging are higher
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
purchasing
product
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products
offline. But
atlast
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at least
at last
this
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problems
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problem
happens very less.
Lastly
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, to conclude shopping of various products or things are more
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
for the people these
day
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's because of
many advantages
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the many advantages
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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