Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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many decades education institutions have been encouraging students by rewarding them.

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some may argue that schools should only be rewarding students who are excelling academically, I believe they should be doing the same for pupil who are improving.

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essay will discuss both views of the statement. Students who are doing well academically need rewarding as it takes a lot of hard work and sacrifices to achieve high grades.

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, a student replaces hanging out with friends and other leisure activities to study.

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group of children

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self-derived and

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, need to be rewarded for putting in extra time and replacing relaxing

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work to achieve good scores.

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, not all students do well academically.

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is either because of other interests

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as sports or learn differently. Most schools teach traditionally, while new generation schools are now taking a

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the UK

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, some schools are educating weaker students with a different approach which has led to improvement in grades and

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, giving out certificates for students who put in the effort. Though

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notion is motivating students to carry on working hard as their effort is working while not everyone is invested to change the traditional way of learning. To conclude, undoubtedly high scoring students do not need any motivation as they are self motivated, while underachievers do need motivation in

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the form

of rewards to stay on the right path to success. I do believe, schools should investigate their way of teaching and use more visual tools for helping students.