In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The ageing

population

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is a common matter nowadays in many communities around the world. As a consequence, there is an unsustainable increase in health maintenance fees.

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raises a dilemma arguing whether the

population

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of the

nation

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should pay for their own health maintenance fees in the future.

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my personal belief, it is crucial for the citizens of a country to fund their own

welfare

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provision. There is an undeniable fact that to force a

nation

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’s

population

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to pay for their own

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health care

is inequity. Before retirement, the older

population

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of the country used to dedicate their well-being and intellect to serve their country, boosting the economy of the

nation

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. As a mean of appreciation, they should be given privileges in their elderly years by the governing force, they should be given a cheap, or free

healthcare

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health care

system. Not only that, but the expenses for those would

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be overwhelming for many people, putting the general

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in a state of illness because

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programs are

unaffordable

that you have the financial means for

affordable

.

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might even form a diversion in the community as people get different forms of treatment.

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the dilemma, there are many merits to civilians paying for their own

healthcare

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health care

fees.

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and foremost,

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would remove a burden on the country’s government: less money would be spent by the Authority on medical bills, allowing that money to be used

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in

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improving the country’s facilities, advancing the life of the people living in the

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, putting less of a strain on the economy.

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, those

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monies

that

doesn’t need

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don’t need

to be consumed on paying for public

welfare

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services could be invested in improving academic facilities like schools, boosting the overall quality of education,…

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, a reasoning

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frequently overlooked is how

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could form a strong bond for members of a family. Because those fees are not funded by the government, children bear the responsibility of looking after their elderly parents and pay for their medical expenses

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of abandoning their parents in nursing homes. In conclusion, with the merits outweighing the drawbacks, I heavily believe that

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should be applied, that the government should let citizens pay for their own

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programs. Not only would

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bring benefits to the

nation

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of a whole, but

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to individuals, to families.