Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, many people think that we should not judge people by their external
appearance
. Others believe that outer appearance
can reveal them about people's personalities. In my opinion, I strongly agree that we should not assume people's personalities based on their appearance
because of these following reasons. Firstly
, it is undeniable that judgment is necessary for our life. We usually decide what is good or bad base
on its outer beauty. Suggestion
based
However
, we can not come to a conclusion about people's personalities when we first
meet them. External appearance
is always misleading, which makes you confused. For example
, if you meet a person who has a fierce face and frightening appearance
, you will be likely to believe that he is strict and grumpy. But in reality, he is a friendly and courteous person. Secondly
, if we always assess people by their outer beauty and we treat them differently, it will make them upset and uncomfortable. For instance
, an overweight boy will feel depressed if his friends excessively blame him for his body. As a result
, he may suffer from mental illness es
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illnesses
such
as depression, anxiety, eating disorders. etc.
There is no point in criticizing him for being overweight. He may indulge in eating food and he wants to become more chubby than being slim. Suggestion
Etc.
Finally
, some people don't take care of their appearance
, so we should not judge them when knowing nothing about them. For example
, Einstein is a great scientist had value contribution
to our science wore weird clothes. Many people thought he was a Suggestion
the value contribution
mad man
when they an insane person
madman
first
met him. That may be a wrong judgment, Einstein was known as a man of integrity and honesty. In conclusion, due to the following reasons, I believe that we should not deduce people's inner qualities from their appearance
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