Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The suitable time for someone getting married is always a controversial topic
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Some people opine that it should be at least 21
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others think we should let everyone make their own decision on choosing the best time to tie a knot
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even at a very young
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like 16
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In my opinion
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viewpoint is justifiable to a certain extent
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there are a number of benefits when the legal marriage
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is raised to 21
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Apparently
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when the
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21 reaches
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the youth may be eligible for a job which helps them improve their economically advantaged background to afford the living
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costs
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as nurturing an offspring
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buying some furniture for their family
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On the one hand
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for people who come from a wealthy family
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they do not need to depend on their parents' budget and
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it will be
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to make ends meet in case of people from lower socioeconomic groups
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when the younger reach maturity so that they are aware of their actions
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, they are willing to be responsible for some undesirable consequences during the period of falling in love with someone like pregnancy at a very young
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believe that the
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of marriage should depend on individuals rather than being compelled by law
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In some
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situations like they become pregnant
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That means if the legislation is applied
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they are forced to abort their fetus
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which goes against the core of humankind's right
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Or in some very special cases like in the time of pandemic or war
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some people desiring
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to marry
with someone may face a plethora of obstacles from the law
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not only their circumstances impede their opportunity to get married
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they have to comply with the law
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a thousand couples on the global scale are prevented from tying the wedding knot because of the fear of the infection of Covid disease
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In conclusion
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both ideas have their own pros and cons so that
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concur with the idea that we should take into account whether the wedding should be took place or not based on their condition
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circumstance in order to make the best final decision
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Legal age
  • Marriage
  • Maturity
  • Stability
  • Individual choice
  • Freedom
  • Cultural practices
  • Religious practices
  • Education
  • Career aspirations
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