Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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many developing countries receive large sums from developed countries in order to tackle poverty, the problem still remains unsolved. Because of

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, many economists argue that they should get benefitted in the ways other than the financial aids. I completely agree with

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view because of the inability of the poor countries to manage money and the limited nature of monetary help.

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with, developing countries or under-developed countries, because they do not know how to manage billions of dollars, get very short-lived benefits if they are helped in

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manner.

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is because there are multiple socio-economical and political reasons due to which the money does not get invested properly by the government. Corruption,

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, prevents many of these countries to achieve something fruitful from the donations.

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,

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the incompetence

of governments to resolve complex and intertwined local problems, liquidity is not the best way to aid them.

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, well-settled nations could help the needy countries in ways that have more sustainable consequences rather than donating big amounts. These ways can develop the smaller economies in a more comprehensive manner that the larger economies forgetting about them after getting relieved of their moral duties.

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, tax benefits provided to wealth companies to invest in developing countries would provide these smaller nations with employment, skills, and better education to meet the demand.

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, while monetary aid definitely helps the country receiving the amount, other

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as foreign direct investments can foster the economy

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capable of being sustained

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. In conclusion, many individuals opine that rich nations should assist poor nations

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to financial assistance.

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is crucial because of the uncertainty of the money's spending and the better potential options for the assistance.