There are people who suffer from poverty in every country. What do you think the reasons for poverty are in your country and what do you think can be done to help these impoverished people?

Nowadays, some people are poor even in the developed country. In
this
essay, I will consider the reasons of people is
lack
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the lack
of
money
and provide some solutions to help these people. In many well developed countries, we can
also
see some people live in poverty. The one reason of
this
issue is the
education
, not everyone can reach the highest qualified.
For example
, I know some of the
student
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students
just graduated from secondary school and did not keep
go
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going
on to achieve the tertiary
education
,
as a result
, they are more likely less job opportunities which
is
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are
in a high
pay
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paying
salary.
Moreover
, the another cause of
this
problem is the uneven distribution of the wealth. People who holding a quantity of
money
are likely to earn more and more
money
.
For instance
, they have a knowledge to know how
to make
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making
money
faster,
consequantly
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
, rich people become more rich and poor people become much poor.
However
, there are some solutions.
Although
som
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
high
pay
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paying
jobs which is
need
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needed
a higher
education
qualified, but there is some jobs is just need a skilled are
also
in a
good
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well
better
paid salary,
such
as, electrical worker, carpenter
,
Accept space
,
gardener and so on. These jobs just need the related experience or vocational certificate, so the student who
can not
can not
cannot
reach the tertiary level are
also
can achieve these kind of jobs.
Additionally
, governments should set a law for citizens who earn too much
money
to increase their
tax
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taxes
.
This
can make people who earn not much
money
to pay a lower
tax
for support their living cost, and the
tax
income from the wealth people can allocate to help
the low income family
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lower income families
lower income family
. In conclusion,
nonetheless
the issue of the pove
rty
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has
have an impact on our city,
however
, there have some solution to solve
this
problem by governments to increase the rich people's
tax
and citizens
who can
can not
cannot
not achi
eve the hi
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higher
gher
education
can do some skilled jobs
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic Disparities
  • Unemployment
  • Underemployment
  • Education Inequality
  • Healthcare Inequality
  • Financial Instability
  • Cost of Living
  • Social Welfare Programs
  • Government Policy
  • Geographic Disparities
  • Development
  • Infrastructure
  • Steady Income
  • Basic Needs
  • Cycle of Poverty
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