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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Read my sample answer for this question here.

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Films are the
important
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most important
 way of entertainment. It is said by some individuals that people should see all
kind
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kinds
 of international films in order to increase their knowledge
,
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,
 while others believe that it can have
adverse effect
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adverse effects
an adverse effect
 on people
.
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.
In
this
 easy I will discuss both
side
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sides
 of
argument
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the argument
an argument
 in the aforementioned paragraphs
To begin
 with, when people will watch foreign
movies
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movies, then
then
 they can get a chance to learn
new language
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a new language
new languages
.
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.
This
 the reason that people watch English movies in order to increase their vocabulary and English speaking skills
.
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.
Another benefit of watching different movies is that
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 people
also
 get a chance to know about the history of any particular country and people can
also
 get to know about different food,
culture
, traditions of any country
.
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.
Those who have limited money can not visit other
countries so
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countries, so
 through films they can get a chance to see
beautiful places
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the beautiful places
 of the world.
On the other hand
, some people believe that watching foreign movies can have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on
people specially
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people, especially
people especially
 children because sometime in these movies some negative things like crime related issues are exaggerated and children follow those things from films. Another disadvantage is that when youngsters watch these films they follow different cultural like they try to copy the hairstyle and buy
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 which are worn by celebrities in films which might have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on the
culture
 of any country because children forget their
culture
. To recapitulate, I would like to write that people should watch foreign
films but
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films, but
 they should not blindly follow western
culture
 and they must remember their roots.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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