Countries are becoming more and more become similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, globalization makes an ability of people can buy foreign products through any web site on the internet easier. I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In

this

essay, I will consider both sizes of the argument and give the reason why I think

this

is a positive development. There are many benefits come from globalization.

For example

, every country can optimize their own business. The trading industry will be more active, because people buy things from other countries,

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cause corporations gains more money

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the circulating capital will be run faster,

this

is good for the country economically.

Moreover

, consumers can get more choice. If they can buy things from other countries,

this

means they not only can buy the product from their own country but

also

can buy something made from another region.

For instance

, a few years ago, Japanese fashion is becoming popular all over the world, and people can buy these clothes from the internet, so

this

is a benefit for the consumer.

On the other hand

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a drawback. The one disadvantage is the whole world will become similar because of the people can possess same things. The best example is if the fashion trend is a red dress,

subsequently

, most of people buy the same dress.

This

will cause something to lose their uniqueness. In conclusion,

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as something's quality will be in the same way,

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strongly believe that the benefits are much more than the drawback, like

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well develop the economy and there is

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more choice for the consumer.