Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

Nowadays, there is an increasing trend to do a
job
between the
school
studies and start of the educational institution.
Although
some people assert there are many detriments of
this
, others suggest it is very beneficial.
This
essay will delve into both vantage points and,
subsequently
, will explore my own perspective in turns. There are many drawbacks attached to take a gap between the
school
and the university study and utilize
this
time in a
job
.
Firstly
, the industrial knowledge gained after
school
studies do not add much value. To explain in detail, usually, people do a
job
between lower and higher studies to gain experience, but a graduate till 12th class, will only be able to perform a lower skilled
job
and that will not add any considerable impact on his resume.
Instead
pupils should utilize
this
time in
further
studies and after completing a university degree, they should go for a
job
.
This
job
will be more decent and will add value in the future. Along with less value addition, discouragement is another reason. Some students find hard to restart studies after a gap, because they become habitual of a
job
and the pay they are getting.
However
, there are
also
advantages.
Firstly
, students gain the
industry
understanding. To elaborate
further
, after lower class studies, working for an
industry
helps to understand the culture and environment of the
industry
,
moreover
, it helps students to choose a field of their like,
further
this
helps in higher studies to select specialized subjects.
In addition
, during
industry
experience, we come into contact with experienced employees and working with them to help us to understand that
industry
better. In conclusion, there are many drawbacks attached with a gap between
school
and the university study and surely it outweighs the advantages associated with it.
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