Smacking is the best form of discipline. Do yo agree or disagree?
There is an obvious difference between children who have undergone spanking and who are not. It is thought by some people that, by physical punishment can teach children about discipline, while others are not agreeing.
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entirely unnecessary for parents in child grooming.
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most of the parents are in trier of controlling aggressive behaviours and inappropriate behaviour patterns. Linking Words
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, stealing at the school and telling lies to teachers and elders. According to the aforementioned reasons, parents are flogging to children most of the times without guide them.
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, there is hidden negative impact in brutality. Linking Words
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, children are used to angry with their own parents other than loving and respect. Linking Words
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, without beating, it is right to teach them good habits. Linking Words
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, when children did the wrong things, Linking Words
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, parents should understand the severity of it as adults. Linking Words
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, recent statistics did by Harvard university, USA reveal majority of smokers, drug dealers and prisoners are persons who have faced corporal punishments in their childhood. Overall, spanking is not a correct way in controlling children, Linking Words
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, it harms to a whole lifetime of a human being.
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