You are doing an evening course.Write a letter to the principal of your school and explain that the course that you are taking is slightly different in the way it is delivered from what the school offered. Provide the details of the course Explain what the problem is Give some suggestions to fix the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with an evening

course

which is being delivered

in

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the school premises. Actually, Sir, a seminar was conducted

in

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the school campus to enhance awareness among the students regarding

the

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extra-curricular activities,

such

as cooking.I took

participation

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in a

course

of

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South Indian cooking.Because I urge to learn the art of their cookery skills. Let me explain in detail the situation.

First

of all, when I attended these classes, our teacher started teaching North Indian food, and

as a result

, when I asked about the description of the

course

.She mentioned that it would be taught

on

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the

last

weekend.

However

, I have already learnt these skills from my mother and grandmother who have

an excellent culinary skills

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excellent culinary skills

an excellent culinary skill

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. I would like to suggest you

to

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transfer me to another

course

, which is completely based on the South Indian cuisines because I wish to acquire methods of preparing Idli,

Dokla

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Dhokla

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, and many more.If it would not be possible,

then

please reimburse my

course

fee. Hoping for

a

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considerable action in

this

regard. Yours faithfully, Gurpreet