It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, education is developed a lot to follow the recent
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
. Some citizens prefer to live in
school
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instead
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of living at
home
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with their parents. In my opinion, I support the idea that living in
school
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has more advantages than living
at
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in
their own
home
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.
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of all, the thing that parents always worry when their children enter the campus of
college
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independently.
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Therefore living
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Therefore, living
in the hostel in the campus of schools give students opportunities to learn everything, from cooking meals to control their budget. Some do the part-time jobs to pay the
school
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’s fee, the bills of renting
house
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a house
to give a hand with their parents.
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, the students earn money and saving some day by day, the value will
increased
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increase
. They can buy more books to improve their studying or leisure things to relax.
Secondly
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, living in
school
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helps their trainee about the distance when they go to
school
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as well as
o
in the direction of
to
on
of
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home
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the home
.
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of a long way from
home
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to the campus of colleges or universities, the students can walk some few steps to the canteen and
then
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go straight to the classroom.
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, it is beneficial to save the money for buses, and the gasoline when they go by cars or motorbikes.
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, the students’
home
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is really far from the
college
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, they have to go there two and a half hour before class, sometimes, because of traffic jams or the matter with vehicles, they will be late. In conclusion, it is better for every
students
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student
, not only
college
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students to live in
school
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than live at
home
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.
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, nowadays many recruits adore living with their parents to depend on their parents to depend on their money and feel lazy to try
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
in the world, especially rich-kid. It is the result of giving the children everything they want.
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a trouble of social to make the parents realise how are they teaching their children in a right way or not. The best solution is let children living
in
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at
school
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, and will see changes of
college
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apprentices.
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