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With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is indisputable that news has become part of our life. Due to advanced technology and
internet
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, it is argued that newspapers will become extinct in the near future, while I disagree with
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 approach as it is the most reliable source of information. To embark on it, there are multifarious reasons why I believe that physical
newspaper
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 will continue.
First
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 and foremost,
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internet
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the internet
 is not much used by elderly. So, they rely on the printed
newspaper
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 for getting updated.
For instance
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, in the survey of
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the Times
 of India showed that 60% of
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 readers are elderly people and they do not have adequate knowledge about
internet
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.
As a result
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, printed
newspaper
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 will retain its popularity among the people. Another is, it is very cheaper and handy. What I mean, people can buy newspapers for spending a travel time as they read it on a bus or train.
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,
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internet
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the internet
 is expensive as compared to newspapers and some regions do not have a proper
internet
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 connection.
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, the people of
this
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regions
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region
 will definitely rely on the printed
newspaper
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. Another point to consider is that information is accurate and true on the physical newspapers rather than on the
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.
In other words
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, journalists find proper news and put some efforts to make articles,
then
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 after it is corrected by many sources before publishing.
Consequently
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, most of the people would prefer to read newspapers.
Moreover
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, if individuals read the newspapers,
then
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 it would be beneficial to them. It is better to read on the physical
newspaper
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 than on the computer screen.
Hence
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, the eyes of people will not be affected by traditional newspapers. In conclusion,
although
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 in the fast pace world, e-news has gained popularity, printed newspapers will not be disappeared
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into
 the future.
Thus
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, I believe that printed
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 will be the main source of information in the future.

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