It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn his distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with his opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Education makes children

leran

gain knowledge or skills

learn

something what is wrong and correct, and

this

is important to study in their childhood stage. Some people think that it is necessary to give a

punishment

to help them to learn the distinction. I agree with

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will discuss why

punishment

is important to

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make

making

child

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a child

the child

to learn and what kind of

punishment

is suitable to teach a

child

to develop

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of them or themselves

their

good behaviour. How to educate our children is the most popular topic in the

parents

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parent

group, and some

punishment

is

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essential

. It is because when someone as a

child

, they do not know what is good or bad things, they just a piece of white paper in their mind. So

that is

why the importance to teach the

child

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at

an early age. And

punishment

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the punishment

is help

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has helped

helps

them to define the matter and do not do it again.

For example

, if a parent punish their children after they did the wrong things,

this

can make them know the thing what they did is not correct, and they will not do it again because of they will think of the end if they do something bad.

However

, there have many varied

way

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ways

to punish, so we need to take the right action.

In other words

, if parents take the over action to punish, it may cause some negative effects.

For instance

, if parents hit their

child

for the punish way,

this

may cause the

child

is more likely to create to violent personality traits. So we must take the correct

punishment

. The best example is

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a parent

can talk to them, and tell them the result if they do the wrong things, if they do it again

,

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and

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

the action will be

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.

This

time parents can not allow

they

objective case of they

them

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to do

the

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something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

thing,

such

as watching TV or play games until they

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understand

the reason. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

punishment

can help

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the child

a child

children

to realize what things is correct or not by parents can talk with them and not allow they do the

favourate

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

things.

However

, parents should not take the significant

punishment

because of the side effect.