our former boss has contacted you to offer you a position to help him start his new company. Write a letter to your former boss. In your letter: • Thank him for the job offering • Decline his job offer and explain why. • Show your appreciation and wish him well on his new project. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

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Mehta, I am writing a letter to inform you concerning the job offer for a new organisation. I am glad to know that I have been selected as a process engineer.

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of all, I am very thankful to you for considering me for

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post. I know that you are planning to set up a new oil and gas company in India. I would definitely love to join the company.

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, I am not mentally ready to

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the decision now.

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, I am not accepting the job offer due to some personal reason. My Father health is not good. He is suffering from Cancer. I need to be present here to take care of him. I do not want to move

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till he gets

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recovery.

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, Your offer is very attractive and I know that it will enhance my career path and

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useful for future

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. But, I am really very sorry for

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you and your team. Yours Faithfully, ANAND

mohan

Aug 23, 2020

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