Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It would be argued by some that international days without
car
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a car
is
an
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a
helpful method to address the levels of
air
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pollution
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. In my opinion,
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, I believe it is not the most workable one because there are more alternative measures to tackle the root of the problem. On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe that banning car some days of the year could diminish the severe
air
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pollution
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. The
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reason is that a high proportion of carbon dioxide from exhausted fumes is produced by cars, it is the chief cause of
air
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pollution
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.It is better if more people recognize and have a day-off car, without harmful fumes, the quality of
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the atmosphere
will be significantly improved. Another reason is
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policy is especially beneficial in metropolises, Beijing perfectly exemplifies
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situation, which is well-known city for its heavy
air
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pollution
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. Thanks to
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policy, the city could curtail the
air
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polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
.
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, I would argue that there are much better methods which deserve the topmost attention of the society.
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, it would be better for the government to spur the use of public transport,
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may help create less emissions into the
air
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.
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, there is less likely to damage
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the environment
.
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, the disposal of waste, especially plastic waste which is burned will be harmful to
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the environment
, should be carefully manipulated.
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, the deeds of using clean and sustainable fuel,
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as wind and solar power, should be gradually replaced fossil fuel. In conclusion, I believe apart from introducing a day without cars, there are more effective ways to make sure that the most desirable results are achieved.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • Finally
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  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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