Some university offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development
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university
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universities
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issue is adverse to some extent, i
do more good than harm.
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Fristly
, It is the introduction of internet base learning that offered undergraduates a massive knowledge hub that stay accessible anytime from anywhere. Specifically, both recorded and live sessions of online courses can be accessed at the click of a single button through devices Suggestion
Firstly
such
as pesonal
computers, laptop and smartphones. Indeed, teachers from concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
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are teaching natural philosophy the capital city of Vietnam; located in North Vietnam
Hanoi
to
student in Bejing through live sessions available 24 hours. Suggestion
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Consequently
, this
advanment
paves the way for cross-border study or transnational education which provided students entering university some academic international qualification without studying aboard. Without encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
such
this
practices
, a student has to be physically present in the classroom that isn’t suitable for people who have a full time job.
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practice
Secondly
, it is also
believed that online programmes tend to be more economical than offline programmes. Particularly, lower tuition fees would create less financial burdens for students, which get an equal chance to access education, regardless of their wealth and background. In fact, an opportunity would be opened up for underprivileged students and those in isolated areas. Admittedly, distance courses which are difficult for student
to make friend or attempt to compete with their peers would hinder one’s concentrate because he is no longer motivation. Suggestion
students
a student
the student
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, with the useful content of the lession
, a unit of instruction
lesson
lessons
this
issue could be eliminated.
In conclusion, despite some advantages that regualar
in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle
regular
couses
offers. I am completely convinced Suggestion
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with
the fact that the benefit of online courses is more outstanding.Suggestion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite